It felt like..
I would have used a different chord progression actually. Instead of going 'F-Eflat-Gsharp-Asharp' methinks it should have just gone straight descending down the scale ('F-Eflat-Dflat-C'). But I don't think anyone really cares because nobody respects me on this site =)
And to the people who said it was 'boring' and stuff, well technically its not 'techno'. This song is like.. pretty trancy if you ask me. But I don't think its too boring to be honest. Thats the reason why there is no cheesy 'climax'.
Its kinda short, but whatever. You could have added like a birdge part or something.
However, still a pretty good effort. Well done.